Talk:Habertürk media sparks outrage over woman’s murder photo in Turkey

comment: Wikinews standards

Wikinews seeks an international audience; please place the article with references to country in which this occurred. I see Turkey mentioned near the end, but it needs to be more prominent.--SVTCobra 00:10, 11 October 2011 (UTC)

Review of revision 1299562 [Not ready]

Revision 1299562 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:47, 11 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not ready: "...violation of journalism ethics rules..." It's good to see neutrality in reporting. The entire piece feels weighted this way, with no effort to represent Habertürk. Style: Not ready: The article text fails to identify the context that this story takes place in early enough, especially which nation this is in. The "inverse pyramid" style is almost exclusively what you should be using. In addition, I refuse to believe that in becoming a journalism student you have never learned what a paragraph is. Please use some. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1299562 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:47, 11 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not ready: "...violation of journalism ethics rules..." It's good to see neutrality in reporting. The entire piece feels weighted this way, with no effort to represent Habertürk. Style: Not ready: The article text fails to identify the context that this story takes place in early enough, especially which nation this is in. The "inverse pyramid" style is almost exclusively what you should be using. In addition, I refuse to believe that in becoming a journalism student you have never learned what a paragraph is. Please use some. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1300329 [Passed]

Revision 1300329 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:39, 12 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please take a look over the edits I made before publication. In particular, it is very important that you do not copy the wording/structure of sources. Also, only list sources that are actually used. On a more positive note, I'm impressed at the level of research that has been conducted here. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1300329 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:39, 12 October 2011 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please take a look over the edits I made before publication. In particular, it is very important that you do not copy the wording/structure of sources. Also, only list sources that are actually used. On a more positive note, I'm impressed at the level of research that has been conducted here. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.