Talk:Illinois jury sentences Brian Dugan to death

Review of revision 911261 [Failed]

Revision 911261 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:44, 12 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: A few more sources would be good - one is just a timeline. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: The headings used aren't necessary (or good), and some of the wikilinks aren't styled correctly. Also the tone used isn't always right. Please read WN:SG Comments by reviewer: Quite a good story, but needs a few stylistic adjustments and a few more sources. Some comments from lawyers etc would be great. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 911261 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:44, 12 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: A few more sources would be good - one is just a timeline. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: The headings used aren't necessary (or good), and some of the wikilinks aren't styled correctly. Also the tone used isn't always right. Please read WN:SG Comments by reviewer: Quite a good story, but needs a few stylistic adjustments and a few more sources. Some comments from lawyers etc would be great. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 911853 [Passed]

Revision 911853 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:00, 14 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Not 100% about 'The jury has been empaneled', but otherwise a good article and that's no reason to fail the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 911853 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:00, 14 November 2009 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Not 100% about 'The jury has been empaneled', but otherwise a good article and that's no reason to fail the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

New category

{{editprotected}} Category:DuPage County, Illinois Benny the mascot (talk) 03:33, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

• Done --Brian McNeil / ^talk 18:08, 12 February 2010 (UTC)