Talk:Poisoned liquor kills 17 in Kenyan slum

Review of revision 1066246 [Failed]

Revision 1066246 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:14, 27 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: needs a copy edit, I'd do it myself but it's quarter past 4 i the morning and I'm just poking my head round the door. It could also do with having the layout tidied a little and maybe a few links to WP. Comments by reviewer: Could do with an expansion as well- there are only really three lines of news. See what else you can extract from the sources. and perhaps paraphrasing would be better than direct quotes. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 03:14, 27 July 2010 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1066246 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:14, 27 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: needs a copy edit, I'd do it myself but it's quarter past 4 i the morning and I'm just poking my head round the door. It could also do with having the layout tidied a little and maybe a few links to WP. Comments by reviewer: Could do with an expansion as well- there are only really three lines of news. See what else you can extract from the sources. and perhaps paraphrasing would be better than direct quotes. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 03:14, 27 July 2010 (UTC) Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1066559 [Passed]

Revision 1066559 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:33, 27 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Much better now. Good work. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 16:33, 27 July 2010 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1066559 of this article has been reviewed by HJ Mitchell (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:33, 27 July 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Much better now. Good work. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 16:33, 27 July 2010 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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1. Rename to spell out numbers of twenty or less, per WN:SG
2. Source is BBC News Online so that it goes to the correct article on enWP. -- Brian McNeil (alt. account) /^{alt-talk • main talk} 05:20, 3 August 2010 (UTC)

• Done —Mikemoral♪♫ 05:52, 3 August 2010 (UTC)