Talk:Russian travel writer Viktor Pinchuk presents book Japan for free in Simferopol, Crimea
Review of revision 4737879 [Not ready][edit]
Revision 4737879 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:01, 22 July 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: @Виктор Пинчук. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 4737879 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:01, 22 July 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: @Виктор Пинчук. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Notes[edit]
Done - Виктор Пинчук (talk) 04:55, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
- Notes? Like here. Heavy Water (talk) 20:35, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
- As in, not just a heading saying "notes", but actual notes like were provided here. Heavy Water (talk) 15:38, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- I confirm that I was indeed present there. Виктор Пинчук (talk) 16:41, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- As I was beginning a full review now, I noticed RIA City marked its article as user-submitted work. Considering that, I don't feel comfortable relying on it to verify the focal event alongside the OR, how I planned on handling this due to the bare nature of the notes. Can you provide more detailed notes (these are good)? Heavy Water (talk) 01:04, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
- I confirm that I was indeed present there. Виктор Пинчук (talk) 16:41, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
- As in, not just a heading saying "notes", but actual notes like were provided here. Heavy Water (talk) 15:38, 25 July 2023 (UTC)
OR notes[edit]
- The presentation began at 2 p.m.
- There were 18 people present, later three latecomers came up.
- The author of the book showed the route traveled on a map projected on the screen. Then he told about his adventures in Japan.
- The rest of the time the audience asked questions and looked through the photo material.
+1 more source — Виктор Пинчук (talk) 06:32, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
Review of revision 4739712 [Passed][edit]
Revision 4739712 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:59, 1 August 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4739712 of this article has been reviewed by Heavy Water (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:59, 1 August 2023 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer:
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |